Overall, this is really good! I love your style- very masterful.
Her breasts are bothering me, though. The one closest to the viewer is fine (anime means they can be big and whatnot), but the other is WAY too low and pointing out a tad too much. I always imagine the way the muscles are when I'm trying to draw breasts- it's difficult to explain, so I would suggest finding a reference. Plenty of sketchbooks and some places online have figures without skin specifically to show where the muscles lie. Hey, that's how the great Da Vinci learned.
AHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHHA~~~!!!!! you got that right! i need to give this 8" waist line girl lot's of food~!!!! ... i missed drawing round circles under her eyes
tainx for pointin out my blunders ^^;;; tenkyutenkyutenkyu~!!!