Overall, this is really good! I love your style- very masterful.
Her breasts are bothering me, though. The one closest to the viewer is fine (anime means they can be big and whatnot), but the other is WAY too low and pointing out a tad too much. I always imagine the way the muscles are when I'm trying to draw breasts- it's difficult to explain, so I would suggest finding a reference. Plenty of sketchbooks and some places online have figures without skin specifically to show where the muscles lie. Hey, that's how the great Da Vinci learned.
AHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHHA~~~!!!!! you got that right! i need to give this 8" waist line girl lot's of food~!!!! ... i missed drawing round circles under her eyes
tainx for pointin out my blunders ^^;;; tenkyutenkyutenkyu~!!!
Problems: Breasts and shoulders. Breasts aren't even, and the neck too sharply changes into the shoulders. The neck/shoulder area should be more curved and stuff. And speaking of the neck, it's a tad long.
But it is really good, just a bit problematic on the anatomy.
Well skinny is easier to draw put it that way right?...*is drawing skinny centaur characters at the moment*...I really like this...its got something about it..maybe because you drew it in pen and never went wrong OO...ekk...
Good piece; I think the real problem you have with the anatomy is actually the curve of her back and/or the way the shirt hangs on it - seems like she's in a far more unnatural posistion than her shoulders/face would suggest.
I love the eyes/facial-features though - and the hair fits the style wonderfully.
nice expression... You want to see the sketch and the CG using photoshop and photoimpact. cause i combine my sketch and the CG in one page in able to everyone see the original drawing and finish CG. you might get some idea with my work that you can apply to your drawings... by the way, am new here.... yesterday only.